Pride is a great feeling knowing that you did something great that people praise and think is and people recognize you for. Too much pride can be a bad thing it can lead to bad decisions and concequences that come with those decisions. Thats the focus on this story and this essay. A very extreme case of how pride can benefit and make someone suffer.Doodle’s brother feels tremendous pride at his accomplishments and demonstrates the virtues associated with high expectations. However, the story also illustrates the negative consequences of pushing someone too hard and wanting them to be great for purely selfish reasons. In this essay, describe in more detail the positive and negative consequences exhibited in the story of Doodle and his brother.
I got a 1 on my scarlet ibis essay mainly because I didn't follow directions. I the writing in my opinion was good but if I just followed directions I think I would've gotten a lot higher score. Next time I think I will pay closer attention to the guidelines and what the teacher tells me to do.
I think this year I've learned the most about essay writing and how an essay should be written. I really struggled this year for essay writing because I was taught before how to write an essay but it wasn't the way I was supposed to write it so, I basically had to learn essay writing all over again and that was really difficult. I practiced more and I think I've gotten a lot better at it. Next year I think I will continue to practice my writing and other techniques to improve my writing.
I got a 1 on my scarlet ibis essay mainly because I didn't follow directions. I the writing in my opinion was good but if I just followed directions I think I would've gotten a lot higher score. Next time I think I will pay closer attention to the guidelines and what the teacher tells me to do.
I think this year I've learned the most about essay writing and how an essay should be written. I really struggled this year for essay writing because I was taught before how to write an essay but it wasn't the way I was supposed to write it so, I basically had to learn essay writing all over again and that was really difficult. I practiced more and I think I've gotten a lot better at it. Next year I think I will continue to practice my writing and other techniques to improve my writing.